Dear David Hair
This year my reading group the Cowleys have been reading your book “The Bone Tiki”
Your book was quite weird. I didn't really understand some parts because it doesn't really make sense at the start because you don't (Don’t take this in a bad way) really explain quite enough about the main character Mat. This is my tip you should have described mat more like what he looked like, Colour hair, Eye colour, Rich or poor ,etc. The most weird part was when the dog turned into the maori legend warrior nearly at the end of the book and it was weird. There are about 100 pages that didn’t need to be in the book and i would have the same amount of info without the pages
My rate for your book was a 2 out of 5 because it wasn't really a suitable book for me -.- -_-
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